IELTS General Writing Task 1 – You want to invite a friend to a holiday trip you are planning this year. | LangorAi.com
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IELTS General Writing Task 1 – Holiday Trip Invitation

IELTS General Writing Task 1 – Holiday Trip Invitation

You want to invite a friend to a holiday trip you are planning this year.

Model Answer (Band 8–8.5)

Dear Jake,

I hope you’re doing well. I’m planning a holiday to Portugal this September, and I’d really love you to come with me. It’s been ages since we travelled together, and I think this would be the perfect chance to catch up and have a proper break.

I’m thinking of spending about a week there, starting in Lisbon before heading south to the Algarve for a few days by the coast. We could explore the old neighbourhoods, try some local food, visit a couple of beaches, and perhaps take a day trip to Sintra. Nothing is completely fixed yet, so we can change the plan if there’s somewhere you particularly want to see.

I’ve checked a few flights and hotels, and prices are still quite reasonable at the moment. If we book within the next couple of weeks, we should be able to get a good deal. I’m happy to organise the accommodation and transport if that makes things easier.

Let me know what you think. It would be brilliant to have you along!

Best,
Oliver

Analytical Review – Strengths, Weaknesses & Improvements

1. Strengths
  • Natural and consistently informal tone suitable for writing to a close friend.
  • The invitation is introduced immediately and the purpose of the letter is completely clear.
  • The trip is described with enough specific detail to make the invitation realistic and engaging.
  • Strong informal collocations such as “catch up,” “have a proper break,” “get a good deal,” and “have you along.”
  • The writer gives the friend flexibility rather than presenting the travel plan as completely fixed.
2. Weaknesses
  • Too many destination details could make the letter sound like a travel advertisement, so the focus must remain on the friend and the invitation.
  • The informal style should remain natural; forcing advanced vocabulary would weaken the authenticity of the letter.
3. Recommended Improvements
  • Include a clear reason why travelling together would be enjoyable or meaningful.
  • Mention practical information such as dates, costs, accommodation, or transport.
  • Leave room for the friend to suggest changes to the proposed itinerary.
4. Stronger Synonyms & Useful Collocations
  • spend time together → catch up
  • relax → have a proper break
  • go towards the south → head south
  • cheap price → reasonable price
  • find a bargain → get a good deal
  • come with me → have you along
5. How to Reach a Higher Band
  • Use contractions such as “I’m,” “I’d,” “It’s,” and “we’re” naturally in informal letters.
  • Use conditional structures naturally, for example: “If we book within the next couple of weeks, we should be able to get a good deal.”
  • Maintain clear progression: invitation → trip details → practical arrangements → friendly closing.
  • Use advanced vocabulary only where it sounds natural in everyday communication.
  • Keep the ending warm and personal rather than using formal expressions such as “Yours faithfully.”